From: Hellion@yabbs
To: Natalie@yabbs
Subject: Words
Date: Tue Apr 12 02:39:45 1994
In message re: manic depression..., Natalie said:
> Hmmm...do you have any suggestions for whatI could do to make my scene 
> better? Do I use the word beautiful too much (I use it 7 times...I 
> counted)?  *grin* 

I guess that it depends.  If this is a romantic scene *like I 
_think_ you were trying* then beautiful was just fine, if it were more
towards the sex thing the words erotic and *I know a cliche* sexy might
have worked better.  Kirkland *who is on very little*  has actually 
written a book with poetry and prose *I am in it too :) * maybe he might
want to respond.  I'll let him know.

Later all
-- Hellion ( look it up in the dictionary, it is my
     exact oppisite :)