From: pbj@yabbs
To: all@yabbs
Subject: a little country ditty
Date: Sat Aug 20 01:39:00 1994
his head between his hands
his hands reached out for me
distressed and lonely
in this world
my promise 'came complete
    i held him close
    i held him tight
    an' when it came
    time to say goodnight..
        I left him with a whisper
        I left him wit ha kiss
        But most of all
        I left him
        With this
He said 
remeber the day
when i took you away
to that little hotel
on the beach
we turned out the lights
and made everything right
i hope now that this
will be 
your favorite memory
    cause i held you close
    i held you tight
    an' when it came time 
    to say goodnight..
    i left you with a whisper
    i left you with a kiss
    but most of all
    i left you with
    my favorite memory

-mirrors
(c) 1994 aweburning

well.. what'd you think??  if it sucks tell me  ....

pbj