From: jujubee@yabbs
To: Pele@yabbs
Subject: re: MetamorphosisII
Date: Sun Aug 21 09:07:24 1994
I liked the story, but i didn't care much for the ending.  This 
catepillar/butterfly still has a lot of unfinished business...unsolved 
problems...(not that the end of a story should bring completely solved 
problems or anything, but it's nice to have a bit of assurance).  The end 
of this story provides me w/no assurance whatsoever...maybe that's the 
way you intended it to be.  The rest of the story was 
thought-provoking...just didn't think the end was...


my minute fraction of a dollar's worth...

jujubee