From: sienna@yabbs
To: batt@yabbs
Subject: re: A Desert
Date: Thu Jun 23 10:37:28 1994
Thanks CJ...your comment was sincerely appreciated. I like to know that a 
particualr poem I wrote with a particular effect in mind actually evoked 
the intended reaction.....

I did not mean to imply that your work is any more or less intense than 
mine I just happen to think you write deep and provoking poems...you do 
not seem to come across as superficial (not that any one's work on
 here has given me that impression). That is all. 

I am glad you like the poem...it helped me to get some of that sadness out 
of me and onto the paper.....sadness held inside to long manifests itself 
as anger and let me tell you, I wasn't too pleasant to be around for a 
while there.

Thanks for the criticism...it motivates me to strive for better!

Dee