From: Natalie@yabbs
To: Maliach@yabbs
Subject: re: Untitled
Date: Sun Jul 24 01:21:32 1994
um...just one thing i noticed about this...you tend to start your lines 
with a lot of the same words...i don't know if you're trying to get a 
rhythmic effect with that or if that's jsthow it's happening...i saw it as 
more repetitious then rhythmic...but that's just my $0.02

natalie